温州数字教育资源网-温州市教育局-MAGIC模式下的7BM10话题写作-Improving forwriting

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00:00:00

Introduction to Revising Writing

This section introduces the lesson's objective, which is to learn how to revise writing by using linking words and the GPS strategy to improve clarity and structure.
00:00:10

Understanding Linking Words

Discusses the function and importance of linking words in writing, including examples like 'for example,' 'however,' and 'besides,' and explains how they help connect ideas logically.
00:01:29

Applying Linking Words to Improve Writing

Demonstrates how to apply linking words to enhance a piece of writing, with practical examples showing how words like 'because' and 'what's more' can make sentences clearer and more logical.
00:02:08

Structuring and Organizing Content

Focuses on writing structure, emphasizing the need for clear organization, useful content, varied sentence structures, and appropriate use of linking words when describing helpful Chinese customs.
00:03:12

Editing and Refining the Passage

Covers techniques for improving writing through adding, deleting, or moving sentences to enhance coherence and readability, ensuring each part supports the overall message.
00:04:28

Using GPS Strategy for Final Edits

Explains how to use the GPS strategy (Grammar, Punctuation, Spelling) to edit mistakes and polish the final draft, making sure every word and sentence is correct and well-placed.
00:05:25

Final Check and Homework Assignment

Concludes with a final check of the revised passage, compares versions, and assigns homework, encouraging students to apply what they've learned and submit their writing.